Thursday, 12 May 2016

The Weird Creature

       The Weird Creature

  1. Walking around
  2. Noises
  3. Creatures


Walking around the house, to find something to do. I searched up interesting things on the internet so it wouldn’t be so tedious. My eyes were slowly closing. Falling on the bed, I quietly hibernated.


Dreaming about nothing, I suddenly woke up. I could hear weird noises around the house. Barking, plates smashing, meowing and the fridge opening. I slowly tip-toed down the hallway.


Slowly, I walked down the dark hallway. Then, I saw a green, slimy and smelly monster. It was making a terrible mess. Dogs started barking outside. The slimy green thing threw the eggs at me. Finally it left. My family came in the door. “ LOOK AT THIS MESS!!” they yelled. “It was a m..m..monster!” I said scaredly. They laughed. “What a weird imagination!” Now clean up this catastrophe.”

By Amy

3 comments:

  1. Nice story.I really like it when I read it sound really good.

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    1. Thank you for the comment. I appreciate it. =)

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  2. This is a great story Amy. I like how you used lots of different descriptive words.

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